Black Beauty by Anna Sewell|
Well folks, here's where it all started. I was in grade five.
Comment by my mom…..
"Val wrote this sometime ago for school -- after reading Black Beauty. Had meant to send in on before."
Comment by my grandmother…
"This is a nicely organized composition. It states a premise. It follows through with three statements, then uses the three to express the writers convictions. It asks and answers a retorical question. It has a concluding statement. I would suggest giving this child a sturdy notebook and encouraging her to write something every day, if only a couple sentences. Who knows she might make her name in journalisam field."
All above material enclosed in quotation marks are exact transcript of original including spelling, grammar and punctuation.